I was also thinking the same ,but that empty space after removing jali will look better or not ?

instead of jail use louvers

thank you SAB design studio for your suggestion .Will you guide me what type of louvers will suit here .

The structure over the planters on the roof terrace is overdoing the design and its not matching with the entire elevation. I suggest to remove it.

if required a wooden pergola can be added attached to the staircase mumty on left side but it should not exceed from the height of mumty. It will complete the elevation. Also if you love planters then put some creepers and hanging lights over the wooden pergola.

See this look like after removing jali and above roof top structure.

looks better than before; a wooden pergola attached to the staircase mumty will do the rest. it will complete the building.

in future we would like to extend 3rd storey so in that case will it look good.

If you leave atleast 1 to 1.5 m of space open as balcony from the front on the upper storey or if it is open more Then also it will not effect the current view. one will get the same view; as the outer wall surface will not be visible from the ground floor.

thanks for valuable suggestion but I request you to please tell me which type of pergola are you specifically talking about ,I was browsing through but not able to find which will suit tge staircase , plz can u elaborate with any image.

wooden pergola reference image.

alot thanks for showing interest ,I will ask my engineer to change and if it suits so.